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Death Dungeon
« on: August 02, 2014, 10:33:41 AM »
My first level to share. I really enjoyed making this level and it is for people who have played a bit. The last level of it is really hard for those kind of people and I think they should have fun with my game except the last level.
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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2014, 10:58:17 AM »
Are you really in 4th grade?

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2014, 11:08:47 AM »
Not a very difficult level.
You should have avoided single-tiled wall.
Other than this, it's OK for having no glaring bugs.

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2014, 11:09:27 AM »
Are you really in 4th grade?
Yes. I go to Kennedy Elementary School and I like math a lot and science. My most favorite game is Minecraft but I like making levels on VVVVVV too. I like Minecraft on iPad and computer, it's not for xbox one yet and I only have that.  :viridian:
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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2014, 11:54:40 AM »
Not a very difficult level.
You should have avoided single-tiled wall.
Other than this, it's OK for having no glaring bugs.
Thank you Nicholashin. Why avoid single-tiled wall?

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2014, 01:33:13 PM »
Some nice criticism on your level.

Nice use of the warp zones

5*5 level is okay i guess.

Nice difficulty, the last level was a nice challenge

Overall, I give a big ++ for you, Zane. :viridian:

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2014, 01:42:36 PM »
Some nice criticism on your level.

Nice use of the warp zones

5*5 level is okay i guess.

Nice difficulty, the last level was a nice challenge

Overall, I give a big ++ for you, Zane. :viridian:

 :viridian: I'm glad you said that. I also made a few improvements, to make it harder! :vermillion: I don't know how to make a 6x5 or 5x6 etc. yet but I'm going to learn.

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2014, 02:23:31 PM »
Good Work! I like it!


I don't know how to make a 6x5 or 5x6 etc. yet but I'm going to learn.

Shift + Arrowkeys.  :)

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2014, 02:35:33 PM »
Why avoid single-tiled wall?
Put simply, they look really weird. They have a "cut-off" appearance, which ends up looking ugly.

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #9 on: August 03, 2014, 08:24:47 AM »
-== I haz Feedback! ==-

(This is your first level, so this rating isn't going to super hard. my ratings aren't actually that hard anyway.)


Level Originality: 3/10  Not many original concepts here, sadly.
Level Design: 7/10 The level design was done quite well, but the single tiled walls are just-
Roomnames: 8/10 These Rooms are named quite well, actually. except for "NO!"
Story: 0/10 Has no story whatsoever, but that's fine. this one doesn't count for first levels.
"Fun Factor": 11/10 Whooooaaaaahhhh... This level is REALLY fun! Good job here!


-==OVERALL RATING==-

TWENTY NINE out of TWENTY
 
aka:  A+++

Good Job!

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #10 on: August 03, 2014, 08:59:46 AM »
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though  :-[

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #11 on: August 03, 2014, 09:16:56 AM »
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #12 on: August 03, 2014, 05:34:34 PM »
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #13 on: August 03, 2014, 09:07:42 PM »
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:

Well, First, you need to make a terminal, or script box. Then press esc...
Just look at Terry's tutorials.

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Re: Death Dungeon
« Reply #14 on: August 05, 2014, 07:26:35 AM »
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:

Fixed!
You can go through the wall here. V

Here's the FIX!