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Portal VVVVVV 2
« on: September 09, 2011, 09:13:59 AM »
Another level! Better than the first one. It's still kinda short, but I'm proud of it.  :viridian:

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #1 on: September 09, 2011, 01:05:33 PM »
This was a lot better.

There were a few things I couldn't get pictures of, but I got some...



Never have a platform embedded in a wall like that.



It's hard to see, but that enemy is stuck in the wall.



Never have a crewmate on top of a warptoken. In the future, this will probably make them teleport. Plus, it looks bad.

Now, onto your scripting:

EVEYR SINGLE SCRIPT REPEATS.

Your scripts were good, but they all repeated. That needs fixing.

And most single-tiles look bad.

But this was better than your last one by far.

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #2 on: September 09, 2011, 01:15:32 PM »
This was a lot better.

There were a few things I couldn't get pictures of, but I got some...



Never have a platform embedded in a wall like that.



It's hard to see, but that enemy is stuck in the wall.



Never have a crewmate on top of a warptoken. In the future, this will probably make them teleport. Plus, it looks bad.

Now, onto your scripting:

EVEYR SINGLE SCRIPT REPEATS.

Your scripts were good, but they all repeated. That needs fixing.

And most single-tiles look bad.

But this was better than your last one by far.

How do I make each thing not repeat? I'm just getting started with scripting.

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #3 on: September 09, 2011, 01:30:42 PM »

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2011, 04:55:54 PM »
You don't have to quote all of my posts. :)

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2011, 05:14:04 PM »
You don't have to quote all of my posts. :)

I will because I can~  :viridian:

Also, PJ pointed everything i wanted to suggest

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2011, 05:57:32 PM »
This is Epic! Except for only one Problem.
OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS EPIC  :viridian:



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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2011, 05:05:15 AM »
I can't get the one time scripts to work.  :victoria:

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #9 on: September 10, 2011, 05:19:34 AM »
I can't get the one time scripts to work.  :victoria:

Then PM  PJ!
Send him a screenshot of what you're having trouble (in-game so he can help you exactly what you're troubling) and he'll be happy to help you~
Riiiiiiiight? =3

Add Floating Spikes to tick him off~ >:3

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Re: Portal VVVVVV 2
« Reply #10 on: September 10, 2011, 06:06:06 AM »
 :-X Right.