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VVVVVV Haikus
« on: January 07, 2010, 09:42:35 AM »
Hey! Write your own haiku pertaining to VVVVVV! :)
Don't know what a haiku is? Check here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Here's mine to start us off:

                                                               The flipping falling -
                                                               even snowflakes awaiten
                                                               gravitys release.



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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2010, 10:06:13 AM »
Damnit try again
Right left right left one more time
Easy mode unlocked?

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2010, 02:03:46 PM »
どこに落ち
くるって回り
深い空き

doko ni ochi
kurutte mawari
fukai aki

(horrible, rough translation to fit within haiku structure)
Where will you fall to
Madly flipping to and fro
The deep emptiness

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2010, 03:47:49 PM »
ConcealRise not here
I wish it were not this way
His haikus are best

The spikes are cruel
Terry, you added so many
Who will wipe my tears?

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2010, 03:53:59 PM »
The spikes are cruel
Terry, you added so many
Who will wipe my tears?

One too many syllables in the second phrase. Maybe "Terry, there are so many"?
« Last Edit: January 07, 2010, 04:36:32 PM by joniho »

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2010, 04:34:08 PM »
Players will all die
when faced with this creation
If they can buy it

-broke-  :'(

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #6 on: January 07, 2010, 05:11:42 PM »
Players will all die
when faced with this creation
If they can buy it

-broke-  :'(
Pssh.  If you can afford food, skip one meal a day for a week, and use that extra money to buy the game.  This is the only reasonable course of action for broke people.

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #7 on: January 07, 2010, 06:49:52 PM »
Players will all die
when faced with this creation
If they can buy it

-broke-  :'(
Pssh.  If you can afford food, skip one meal a day for a week, and use that extra money to buy the game.  This is the only reasonable course of action for broke people.

uh-huh. especially since my parents don't want me playing games, and don't give me an allowance.
I don't pay for food.

well, i guess i wouldn't be "broke" then, i just wouldn't have any money to spend =P

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #8 on: January 08, 2010, 10:45:56 AM »
A crew of six are lost in space.
Their captain finds that he can trip
His right side up, his up side down,
And flips the frown that's on his face.

Did I do it right you guys

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2010, 02:01:39 PM »
not really. a haiku consists of 3 lines. the lines have 5, then 7, then 5 syllables in them. (in that order)

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #10 on: January 08, 2010, 03:08:23 PM »
not really. a haiku consists of 3 lines. the lines have 5, then 7, then 5 syllables in them. (in that order)

Yes, I know, I was making a joke :/ All right, all right, here goes:

Up and down against
A backdrop of scrolling stars
V, the flying world.
« Last Edit: January 08, 2010, 03:13:01 PM by madamluna »

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #11 on: January 10, 2010, 10:07:31 AM »
Vvvv vvv vv v
vvvvvv v vvv vvvv;
vvvvvvvvvvv vvvvv.

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #12 on: January 10, 2010, 12:36:03 PM »
I think this should just be the VVVVVV poetry thread :3

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #13 on: January 10, 2010, 12:56:48 PM »
This is my first one, and I'm not english, so pardon me

Why from dawn to dusk
Do I refresh this website
Waiting for some fun

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Re: VVVVVV Haikus
« Reply #14 on: January 10, 2010, 01:38:29 PM »
I wait for the game.
VVVVVV to be surely exact.
I will wait longer.