Portal VVVVVV 2

Started by calstin898, September 09, 2011, 04:13:59 PM

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calstin898

Another level! Better than the first one. It's still kinda short, but I'm proud of it.  :viridian:

PJBottomz

This was a lot better.

There were a few things I couldn't get pictures of, but I got some...



Never have a platform embedded in a wall like that.



It's hard to see, but that enemy is stuck in the wall.



Never have a crewmate on top of a warptoken. In the future, this will probably make them teleport. Plus, it looks bad.

Now, onto your scripting:

EVEYR SINGLE SCRIPT REPEATS.

Your scripts were good, but they all repeated. That needs fixing.

And most single-tiles look bad.

But this was better than your last one by far.

calstin898

Quote from: PJBottomz on September 09, 2011, 08:05:33 PM
This was a lot better.

There were a few things I couldn't get pictures of, but I got some...



Never have a platform embedded in a wall like that.



It's hard to see, but that enemy is stuck in the wall.



Never have a crewmate on top of a warptoken. In the future, this will probably make them teleport. Plus, it looks bad.

Now, onto your scripting:

EVEYR SINGLE SCRIPT REPEATS.

Your scripts were good, but they all repeated. That needs fixing.

And most single-tiles look bad.

But this was better than your last one by far.

How do I make each thing not repeat? I'm just getting started with scripting.

PJBottomz



PJBottomz

You don't have to quote all of my posts. :)

xTwoTails

Quote from: PJBottomz on September 09, 2011, 11:55:54 PM
You don't have to quote all of my posts. :)

I will because I can~  :viridian:

Also, PJ pointed everything i wanted to suggest

robloxfan1999

This is Epic! Except for only one Problem.
OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS EPIC  :viridian:



calstin898

I can't get the one time scripts to work.  :victoria:

xTwoTails

Quote from: calstin898 on September 10, 2011, 12:05:15 PM
I can't get the one time scripts to work.  :victoria:

Then PM  PJ!
Send him a screenshot of what you're having trouble (in-game so he can help you exactly what you're troubling) and he'll be happy to help you~
Riiiiiiiight? =3

Add Floating Spikes to tick him off~ >:3

PJBottomz