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VVVVVV => VVVVVV Levels => Topic started by: Zane on August 02, 2014, 05:33:41 pm

Title: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 02, 2014, 05:33:41 pm
My first level to share. I really enjoyed making this level and it is for people who have played a bit. The last level of it is really hard for those kind of people and I think they should have fun with my game except the last level.
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Zane
4th grade
iMac OSX 10.9.4
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Flushex on August 02, 2014, 05:58:17 pm
Are you really in 4th grade?
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: . on August 02, 2014, 06:08:47 pm
Not a very difficult level.
You should have avoided single-tiled wall.
Other than this, it's OK for having no glaring bugs.
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 02, 2014, 06:09:27 pm
Are you really in 4th grade?
Yes. I go to Kennedy Elementary School and I like math a lot and science. My most favorite game is Minecraft but I like making levels on VVVVVV too. I like Minecraft on iPad and computer, it's not for xbox one yet and I only have that.  :viridian:
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 02, 2014, 06:54:40 pm
Not a very difficult level.
You should have avoided single-tiled wall.
Other than this, it's OK for having no glaring bugs.
Thank you Nicholashin. Why avoid single-tiled wall?
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Lollipop on August 02, 2014, 08:33:13 pm
Some nice criticism on your level.

Nice use of the warp zones

5*5 level is okay i guess.

Nice difficulty, the last level was a nice challenge

Overall, I give a big ++ for you, Zane. :viridian:
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 02, 2014, 08:42:36 pm
Some nice criticism on your level.

Nice use of the warp zones

5*5 level is okay i guess.

Nice difficulty, the last level was a nice challenge

Overall, I give a big ++ for you, Zane. :viridian:

 :viridian: I'm glad you said that. I also made a few improvements, to make it harder! :vermillion: I don't know how to make a 6x5 or 5x6 etc. yet but I'm going to learn.
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 02, 2014, 09:23:31 pm
Good Work! I like it!
(http://vvvccc.comxa.com/img/verdigris.png)

I don't know how to make a 6x5 or 5x6 etc. yet but I'm going to learn.

Shift + Arrowkeys.  :)
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: allison on August 02, 2014, 09:35:33 pm
Why avoid single-tiled wall?
Put simply, they look really weird. They have a "cut-off" appearance, which ends up looking ugly.
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 03, 2014, 03:24:47 pm
-== I haz Feedback! ==-

(This is your first level, so this rating isn't going to super hard. my ratings aren't actually that hard anyway.)


Level Originality: 3/10  Not many original concepts here, sadly.
Level Design: 7/10 The level design was done quite well, but the single tiled walls are just-
Roomnames: 8/10 These Rooms are named quite well, actually. except for "NO!"
Story: 0/10 Has no story whatsoever, but that's fine. this one doesn't count for first levels.
"Fun Factor": 11/10 Whooooaaaaahhhh... This level is REALLY fun! Good job here!


-==OVERALL RATING==-

TWENTY NINE out of TWENTY
 
aka:  A+++

Good Job!
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 03, 2014, 03:59:46 pm
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though  :-[
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 03, 2014, 04:16:56 pm
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 04, 2014, 12:34:34 am
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Lollipop on August 04, 2014, 04:07:42 am
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:

Well, First, you need to make a terminal, or script box. Then press esc...
Just look at Terry's tutorials.
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 05, 2014, 02:26:35 pm
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:

Fixed!
You can go through the wall here. V
(http://www.weebly.com/uploads/2/5/4/1/25413278/1407248586.jpg)
Here's the FIX!
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: shape worrior t on August 07, 2014, 08:44:41 pm
Hi. This is my first post. :viridian:

OFF TOPIC:
There is more text here than text that meets the eye.
Quote From: twolumps.net[/i][/u] Ebenezer: Hear the griping of MEER - Piercing meer! / What a world of misery we portray for you here! / How we whine, whine, whine, / In the living room at night! / While we deny that we are fine / And on the gooshyfood must dine, / As is our true feline right; / And we kvetch, kvetch, kvetch, / That our dinner you must fetch, / With the cacophonic chaos that all cat owners must fear, / From the... / Snooch: MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! / Ebenezer: From the whining and the griping of the MEER.
Ebenezer: Hear the never-ending meer, Grating meer! / What a tale of starvation its raucous tones make clear! / Through the balmy darkened air / How they ring out their despair! / From the deadened-leaden notes, / And off-key, / What a scathing howling floats / To Mom's ears buried 'neath pillows, it denotes: / Let me be! / Under bedroom door so near, / What a gush of annoyance inhabitants must hear! / How we sneer! / How they fear / That their rest is thwarted here By our perseverance sheer / To the: / Snooch: MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! M...
Mom: IT'S THREE IN THE ^@#$ING MORNING, YOU OBESE MEATLOAVES! YOU DO NOT NEED GOOSHYFOOD! / Ebenezer: Nobody appreciates the classics anymore.
...What was that exactly? What was the point of that?

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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-  ------  <with warping on all directions
Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level. :viridian:
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: Zane on August 08, 2014, 10:15:31 am

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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|        |
-  ------  <with warping on all directions
Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level. :viridian:
Hi shape worrier t,
Sorry if there are any glitches, but please let me know if there are and I'll fix it right away. Also, give me the room name so I can find it quickly.

Good news, Double death dungeon, a 9 by 9 map I made is finished! :viridian: but I still haven't tried to add story.  This is very hard to complete with ALL trinkets and crewmates! :vermillion: I'll post it this weekend.

—Zane
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 08, 2014, 01:36:05 pm
Hi. This is my first post. :viridian:

OFF TOPIC:
Quote from: REMOVED POST
[REMOVED]
...What was that exactly? What was the point of that?

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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|        |
|        |
-  ------  <with warping on all directions
Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level. :viridian:
OFF TOPIC:

Pointless, Really. Just found out you could make that color text and got excited. Sorry... :-[ Removed it.

MORE OFF TOPIC:

Your first post? Here? That's pretty cool.   (http://vvvccc.comxa.com/img/verdigris.png)

Whoa, Zane, your level is already a "Hot Topic"    (http://vvvccc.comxa.com/img/verdigris_shock.png)

(http://vvvccc.comxa.com/img/verdigris_right.png)   ON TOPIC:    (http://vvvccc.comxa.com/img/verdigris.png)

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Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: shape worrior t on August 08, 2014, 02:50:35 pm
I made a few changes to avoid glitches, but the file size of the attachment is too big.  :victoria:
Rooms I edited:
love viper: I made a spike pit under the entrance so that you would die instead of glitch if you flipped.
4,2: I removed the warping.
5,4: I removed the warping again.
If anyone can edit these rooms like that and make an attachment but bypass the limit, that would be awesome. :viridian:

Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 08, 2014, 05:50:26 pm
shape worrior t, I fixed my version to have your edits!
Also, I added a little intro!
Quote from: shape worrior t
love viper: I made a spike pit under the entrance so that you would die instead of glitch if you flipped.
4,2: I removed the warping.
5,4: I removed the warping again.


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Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: shape worrior t on August 08, 2014, 07:05:23 pm
Awesome ;D
Now this level is basically glitch-free!  :viridian:
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: stylzm on August 08, 2014, 09:36:16 pm
Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though.  :-[

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  :viridian: but there were a few glitches. :victoria: From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story. :victoria:
Fixed!
You can go through the wall here. V
(http://www.weebly.com/uploads/2/5/4/1/25413278/1407248586.jpg)
Here's the FIX!
this is off topic but... how did you get  :viridian: to look like that and also the :shiny: to look like a companion cube?
Title: Re: Death Dungeon
Post by: moth 🦋 on August 09, 2014, 01:57:14 pm
I edited VVVVVV's sprites.png to make the crewmates look somewhat like this ":3". As for the trinket, I also edited sprites.png, but making them look like companion cubes was unintentional.