Distress in Nishigura (NEARLY DONE, STILL WIP)

[jamodawg97]

I have made significant progress in my level; Distress in Nishigura.

http://www.mediafire.com/?9kw0ocl3hws9rww

STORY: You are on your ship when you receive a distress call from your crew...

I would add pictures, but I don't know what I should use or how.

Tell me what you think and remember, it is still in progress.