Lost in Space! (WIP)

[ignika98]

 Hey guys this is my first actual level for VVVVVV. I have experimented with the level editor beforehand but this is the first time I actually sat down to make a proper level. Its unfinished but the rooms I do have are solid from what my friends and I have tested. Any constructive criticism is welcome of course!



 

[EDIT]I've updated the attachment. The level is now slightly easier, and has some more text.

[Terry]

Just played through it. Not bad for a first attempt!

Some minor feedback - there are a lot of spelling mistakes in the scripts and roomnames of this level. Most jarring was "timeing", just because it was used so often...

[Pyrite]

Misspellings, in order:

• Shields
• What's
• Timing
• Timing
• Timing
• Resurrection
• Timing
• Timing
• It's
• I'm
• Thhherrrrrre
• There's

I'm sorry, it's just so bothersome.

[FIQ]

Ok, how do people get through the "Timeing" room? D:

The exit is.. so narrow

EDIT: *bangs himself to the head after realizing that he tried to do the room in the entire wrong way*

OK, some feedback:

As many have pointed out, there are many spelling errors.
About the (current) ending, maybe you should move the inversion plane 2 pixels down or something (maybe even put 2 gravity lines there for extra visibility)? Because at the moment, the cutscenebars (black borders at the top and bottom) hide it, and may cause confusion as for what Vermillion really did.

[Pyrite]

And 'TIMEING 3'
agh.
is pretty much impossible.

[ignika98]

The spelling mistakes will get fixed once I get done with the next crew mates level.  Also just to prove that it is possible here's a video of me beating it.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w74Le6BEuQE&feature=youtu.be



Also if your feeling daring, here's the original "hard mode". And yes, it is possible to beat.

[Pyrite]

There is no way to get the trinket, and...

Hard mode was easier than normal mode.

[ignika98]

Hard mode was easier than normal mode.

Really? -.-

[ToasterApocalypse]

Wait what did you use to record that?

[ignika98]

Wait what did you use to record that?

Fraps.

[ToasterApocalypse]

Wait what did you use to record that?

Fraps.

Oh ok.

And if you want to make Vermillion happy, do "happy(Vermilion) without quotes

I'm not sure if it's Vermilion or Vermillion, but it's one of those