Death Dungeon

[shape worrior t]

Hi. This is my first post.

OFF TOPIC:

There is more text here than text that meets the eye.
Quote From: twolumps.net[/i][/u] Ebenezer: Hear the griping of MEER - Piercing meer! / What a world of misery we portray for you here! / How we whine, whine, whine, / In the living room at night! / While we deny that we are fine / And on the gooshyfood must dine, / As is our true feline right; / And we kvetch, kvetch, kvetch, / That our dinner you must fetch, / With the cacophonic chaos that all cat owners must fear, / From the... / Snooch: MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! / Ebenezer: From the whining and the griping of the MEER.
Ebenezer: Hear the never-ending meer, Grating meer! / What a tale of starvation its raucous tones make clear! / Through the balmy darkened air / How they ring out their despair! / From the deadened-leaden notes, / And off-key, / What a scathing howling floats / To Mom's ears buried 'neath pillows, it denotes: / Let me be! / Under bedroom door so near, / What a gush of annoyance inhabitants must hear! / How we sneer! / How they fear / That their rest is thwarted here By our perseverance sheer / To the: / Snooch: MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! MEER! M...
Mom: IT'S THREE IN THE ^@#$ING MORNING, YOU OBESE MEATLOAVES! YOU DO NOT NEED GOOSHYFOOD! / Ebenezer: Nobody appreciates the classics anymore.

...What was that exactly? What was the point of that?

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level.

[Zane]

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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|        |
-  ------  <with warping on all directions
Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level.

Hi shape worrier t,
Sorry if there are any glitches, but please let me know if there are and I'll fix it right away. Also, give me the room name so I can find it quickly.

Good news, Double death dungeon, a 9 by 9 map I made is finished! but I still haven't tried to add story.  This is very hard to complete with ALL trinkets and crewmates! I'll post it this weekend.

—Zane

[shiny]

Hi. This is my first post.

OFF TOPIC:

[REMOVED]

...What was that exactly? What was the point of that?

ON TOPIC:
A very good level! There is potential for glitches (remember that warping can cause collision errors, so don't create a warping room and then make an entrance that warps without a gap on the other side, AKA this:)
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|        |
|        |
-  ------  <with warping on all directions
Also, the last level is hard indeed. Maybe you could put a checkpoint after the enemies after the second checkpoint to make it easier and more fun? I think that with this change, you wouldn't need to say how hard the last level is, since it's much easier.
Otherwise, it's a pretty good level.

OFF TOPIC:

Pointless, Really. Just found out you could make that color text and got excited. Sorry... Removed it.

MORE OFF TOPIC:

Your first post? Here? That's pretty cool.   

Whoa, Zane, your level is already a "Hot Topic"   

   ON TOPIC:   

FIXED VERSION IF YOU DIDN'T READ THE ABOVE POSTS.
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[shape worrior t]

I made a few changes to avoid glitches, but the file size of the attachment is too big. 
Rooms I edited:
love viper: I made a spike pit under the entrance so that you would die instead of glitch if you flipped.
4,2: I removed the warping.
5,4: I removed the warping again.
If anyone can edit these rooms like that and make an attachment but bypass the limit, that would be awesome.

[shiny]

shape worrior t, I fixed my version to have your edits!
Also, I added a little intro!

love viper: I made a spike pit under the entrance so that you would die instead of glitch if you flipped.
4,2: I removed the warping.
5,4: I removed the warping again.

FIXED VERSION: HERE YOU GO!
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VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV

[shape worrior t]

Awesome
Now this level is basically glitch-free! 

[stylzm]

Here. after my rating I made a version.
You don't need to use it, but you should study it.
I didn't add story though. 

That is sooooo cool that you did that,  but there were a few glitches. From a scale of 1 to 5 I'd say a 4. Also, I don't know how to add story.

Fixed!
You can go through the wall here. V

Here's the FIX!

this is off topic but... how did you get  to look like that and also the to look like a companion cube?

[shiny]

I edited VVVVVV's sprites.png to make the crewmates look somewhat like this ":3". As for the trinket, I also edited sprites.png, but making them look like companion cubes was unintentional.