Cage Trouble - a level of trials and trinket challenges

[shape worrior t]

Object-Overruled!What???!??

So, this is one of my recent levels, after I learned scripting but before I started using flags or internal scripts. Captain Viridian and friends are captured by an evil clone of Viridian. Viridian escapes, only to be put on trial and declared "GUILTY". Viridian then has to go through another trial and then a few challenges based on trinket rooms in the real game. Will Viridian succeed in rescuing the other crewmembers?
And if you want to play only the trinket challenge part, I made a level that's a remake of said part. It gives the rooms names, makes them much better, and should be tried.
What a bad court. At least it's not official...

If you want something like , use Quote that if you can't see.

Now I have internal scripting in it ! It should be the third attachment.

And now I have an even newer version that lets Viridian escape the first cage if you activated the trinketcheck1 script that lets you escape .
Any comments?

[shiny]

Huh. Here is my Verdic--Er, I mean, rating. Heh, heh.
Love the PW games. Especially Trials and Tribulations.


-== I haz Feedback! ==-


Level Originality: 9/10  Done quite well, actually. Pretty Original.
Level Design: 7/10 I like it, but SINGLE TILED WALLS WITHOUT DIRECT MODE ARE-----We interrupt this moment for a public broadcasting: "Press F10 to use Direct Mode." Thank you for your time.
Roomnames: 5/10 I'll be rating the rooms in Trinket Challenge. They were mostly parodies of existing rooms in the main game, but some weren't. The parodies were actually pretty funny.
Story: 4/10 Has story, but I didn't really understand it very well. Also you couldn't tell who was talking.  or  's Clone. The Textboxes were only over  's head? Or maybe  's Clone's head. I don't Know. But the story wasn't bad...
"Fun Factor": 6/10 Not too fun in my opinion, because I didn't really follow the story.

-==OVERALL RATING==-

THIRTY ONE out of THIRTY
 
aka:  A++

Wow.

[shape worrior t]

Okay!
I think I'll update this level for direct mode and try to find a way to make the textboxes appear where they should be. I didn't like that either.
*A while later*
Well, I wasn't able to make the confusion stop, I did use direct mode. And I edited some errors out of scripts.
Maybe I could use reply() instead of say(player)?
*More time later*
Alright! You can try this version.

[shiny]

Huh. Here is my REVISED Verdic--Er, I mean, rating. Heh, heh.
Love the PW games. Especially Trials and Tribulations.


-== I haz Feedback! ==-


Level Originality: 9/10  Done quite well, actually. Pretty Original.
Level Design: 10/10 I love it! the single tiled wall are fixed, leaving you with a 10/10!
Roomnames: 5/10 I'll be rating the rooms in Trinket Challenge. They were mostly parodies of existing rooms in the main game, but some weren't. The parodies were actually pretty funny.
Story: 6/10 Has story, but I didn't really understand it very well. The mispositioned textboxes are cleared, so I'll up this to a 6/10.
"Fun Factor": 8/10This level is a lot more fun since the bugs are fixed! I still didn't really follow the story, keeping it at a 8/10.

-==OVERALL RATING==-

THIRTY FOUR out of THIRTY
 
aka:  A+++

Woah.... 


OFF TOPIC:

[suspicious]if you check
brazzers14's and lingerie73's profiles and view their posts, you'll find that they spambots and advertisingbots! 
This is TERRIBLE! the spambots are taking over!!!![/suspicious]

[shape worrior t]

    Wow....
I wish the spambots didn't even make a account on this forum....
ON TOPIC
Maybe I'll still change some things to make this level even better. Not too likely though.

[allison]

[suspicious]if you check
brazzers14's and lingerie73's profiles and view their posts, you'll find that they spambots and advertisingbots! 
This is TERRIBLE! the spambots are taking over!!!![/suspicious]

Well, they aren't nearly as bad as they used to be. Even now there are 24 pages of users, most of which are now-banned spambots...

[shape worrior t]

Good .
If anyone else wants to comment on my level, go ahead!

[shiny]

ON TOPIC:

Please work on it some more. I might give a version I edited IF you want it.
it contains: MORE direct mode and INTERNAL COMMANDS.

OFF TOPIC:
[suspicious]A new Spambot Appeared! erpsystem22![/suspicious]  

Good .

Smiley face then period?  . I like it .

[shape worrior t]

I'm adding some internal commands right now, but you could still edit it.
A while later...

[shiny]

ON TOPIC:

YOU CAN INTERNAL SCRIPT??!?

This new version is great. I love it!

Please work on it some more. I might give a version I edited IF you want it.

I actually am working on a project of my own. sorry.

[allison]

^never drink and post

[shiny]

^never drink and post

That was a joke, right?

[shape worrior t]

^never drink and post

That was a joke, right?

Um...

ON TOPIC???:
I'm not too experienced with internal scripting, but I can do some internal scripting.
I am only familiar with the say(-1) method.

ACUALLY ON TOPIC THIS TIME:
I wanted Viridian to automatically walk and collect all trinkets, but I wasn't able to get  very far without being unable to close the You got a trinket! message .

What my script was going to be:
say(-1)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
walk(right,100)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene()
untilbars()
loadscript(stop)

What my script was:
say(-1)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
walk(right,10)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene()
untilbars()
loadscript(stop)

^{_{say-1
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
vvvvvvman()
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene()
untilbars()
loadscript(stop)}}
^my knowledge of internal scripting.

Now I updated the title page with this! For those who don't want to see a later post just to download a new version.

^{I can do vvvvvvman, gravitron(gamestate10) and walk}
_{And some more, but I usually use these.}

[shiny]

okay. Here is an easy trick to collect all 9(?) Trinkets.

• hide the nine(?) trinkets in a room that is not accessible.

[li]use:
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Code: [Select]

foundtrinket(trinketnumber)

nine(9) times.[/li]

[shape worrior t]

 
Maybe I'll use something like that for a different level...
Still awesome !
A while later:
Here's a new version that prevents the game from being unwinnable:
^{_{Any comments?}}