Ih8creeperz's First Level! :)

[Ih8creeperz]

Welcome to my first VVVVVV level!
I've played VVVVVV about 5 hrs, but this is my first level I've created. So please help me with commenting so I can become more experienced and create better and more fun levels to play. (Also I suck at terminal work)
I have a youtube channel, so please check it out: www.youtube.com/user/TheMinecraftMasters0 (my friend made up the name but the actual channel name is Evan N' Kyle)
Level: http://www.mediafire.com/download/7c4k83ngkgevix3/My+First+VVVVVV+Level.vvvvvv
EDIT: I am now working on a new level for VVVVVV, and I am taking your guys' help and using it in the new level.
The new level will be a LOT better than my first. 

[Lollipop]

Ugh...... Mr. Creeper, do you see the attachments and other options when you made the Topic?
Chances are, if you turn your .vvvvvv file into a zip with the file inside, you can upload it as a
Paper lop without having the pesky media fire links.

[Scruffy]

I think this level is way too short

[moth ✨]

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...Have you read the level editor tutorial yet?  Because if you have, then your level shouldn't be just one room. No checkpoints?! Did you know you could place disappearing platforms on top of spikes? If you do this, then player will die if he doesn't move off the platform fast enough.

Also, please DON'T EVER use SINGLE TILED WALLS! EVER!

OFF TOPIC:
I checked out your youtube channel and saw that you did videos of my two of favorite games! Terraria and Cave Story!(Remember, VVVVVV is the best game ever) Highlight inbetween the  parentheses to read the message.
You have +1 more subscriber! 

Here is a version that makes it look... ...Better.

[Ih8creeperz]

Sorry, it's been a year and a half since I've played this game so I'm brushing up on it 

[moth ✨]

Okay previous post updated, you can download the polished version there! Please DO NOT press F10 on your keyboard of it will look ugly again.