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Riki the crewmate

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my first level dimension riki
« on: April 30, 2015, 01:30:07 pm »
save the  :victoria:

have fun!
i took myself 30 min making this along with learning scripting and constant crashes because of my messy
scripts!
 :vitellary: its all new!

edit : version 3 out!!!


« Last Edit: May 01, 2015, 06:49:40 pm by Riki the crewmate »

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Re: my first level dimension riki
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2015, 02:17:05 pm »
feedback?

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Re: my first level dimension riki
« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2015, 04:57:19 pm »
and that's all? i expected something longer.
pst: you could include a line of dialogue of viridian after "teh fall" (the intended name was "the fall" i guess?) saying: "nobody? you must mean EVERYBODY" :D


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Re: my first level dimension riki
« Reply #3 on: April 30, 2015, 10:02:18 pm »
hahahaah, i know but my messy scripting (you know)

could breeak the entire game lol
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edit = i double posted, but ok. i learned flags and used them.
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Re: my first level dimension riki
« Reply #4 on: May 01, 2015, 01:22:13 am »
Review number 2:

Okay, that thing was TINY. Like, beat it in thirty seconds tiny. But the room design was good, except for a few floating checkpoints. This level shows promise for future by you! So I give you a 3/5, only because of the length. Good level!