So I played it. It was pretty standard, except one thing.
THE.
FREAKING.
CUTOFF.
TEXTBOXES.
Okay, look. In older versions of VVVVVV, you could only have five lines. Now, we can have up to eleven. ELEVEN.
Not only that, but your textboxes are too small as well. as long as it is one character away from being on the edge of the screen, it will fit. If you are having long monologues, or are just trying to fit a sentence in, then use this (or you know use the ELEVEN lines you are given). This is sorta common knowledge...