My First Level!

[Henry03]

Hello!

I've played VVVVVV for a year already.

This is my first (finished) level!

It is not very difficult (I used half an hour to make it)

Crewmate: 
Trinkets: 1
Map Size: 5x5

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Hi there!Welcome!
I don't normally reply threads...but seeing your name makes me wanna ask one thing:
are you chinese?(cuz your name say so)

PS.Just played it.Sorta easy at first,but it gets harder.Also,try not to use repeating scripts,bit annoying.
And you can make it even harder actually.

[SomeRandomCreator]

This level was easy (except for the final two) and has room for improvement. But, as a first level, I must say, it's quite good and it was fun! Great job!

[LafondaSaysMeow]

Alright, let me look at it with more details.


Alright. I like that you thought of the deja vu type thing, but three things.
1. It's likely been done a lot before.
2. You seem to be using warps to get to the next section. You can increase or decrease the map size by holding shift and using the arrow keys.
3. The wall layout never seems to change until the very end with that trinket. The thing I don't like about this is the actual wall size itself, it is a little wide to use throughout the whole level.

There are also some other bits that can be improved on as well, but I won't go harsh on you as I know it is your first level.
1. Try experimenting with backing, something I never noticed in the level. It's the second option in the editor, next to walls, in both editors. (I'm talking about the main one and Ved.)
2. Try to refrain from using glitches, if you spot any in your level, like the last challenge where gravity lines intersect each other. Viridian can go through them.
3. Try making longer scripts, since having one line is a little underwhelming.
3.5. Your script does repeat. There are lots of guides around here that teach you how to make them not repeat, but it is actually quite simple.


But it is okay for a first level, just keep these tips in mind for your next level.
See you around!