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level: Cyberspace
« on: August 23, 2011, 11:55:24 pm »
a new level, took me a while to find time for it (keep in mind that I test every level I make)

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Re: level: Cyberspace
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2011, 11:57:40 pm »
Review: 7/10

Pros: Short and sweet
Mostly polished

Cons: Not difficult at all
Too short and not enough sweet
« Last Edit: August 25, 2011, 09:01:54 pm by FlamingBanana »

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Re: level: Cyberspace
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2011, 12:32:24 am »
This level isn't too bad. :-\ Maybe a bit more storyline and a lot more polish needed. But at least it wasn't like, rrr, that OTHER one... :-X

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Re: level: Cyberspace
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2011, 08:22:53 pm »
Rating #042
Enjoyment: 8/10
Aesthetics: 8/10
Novelty: 2/10
Difficulty: 4/10
Room Names: 5/10

This one is definitely an improvement over your previous levels!  It played very smoothly, no glitches or particularly frustrating rooms.  This level looked quite nice as well, though I noticed a lot of similarities to rooms from the actual VVVVVV.  You took some room names from it too, and though that's no big deal, it makes your level look a little less "yours".  Anyway, here's some room complaints:

"Diagnal" - did you spell it that way on purpose?  Or is it supposed to be "Diagonal"?  Not a big complaint, this is actually one of my favorite rooms in the whole level.  It looks very nice.

"Wrong Turn" - why does this room even exist?  Just close the top in the room below it.  I hate unavoidable deaths T_T

"...or slow" (is that what it was called?) - There's not much room to get past the enemy here.  It's a bit harder than anything else in the level, which feels wrong.

Nothing else to say.  You're getting better!

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Re: level: Cyberspace
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2011, 12:18:24 am »
I really liked it :)
Finally an easy level ;)

Pros
+ not too hard
+ a lot of different challenges
+ it's like a tasty snack!
+ no bugs!

Cons
- a little short
- it needs some kind of little story

Overall a very good job, I know how much time it takes to test everything and I think you did great!

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