What am I screwing up here?

[Info Teddy]

So, I have this script here, and I'm running it in 2.1.

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say(-1)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(gray)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,85,2)
DATE: 04/13/2038
TIME: 2:42 PM
speak
say(2)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I hope this thing actually works.
backgroundtext
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene
untilbars
loadscript(stop)Run it for yourself in 2.1 beta and you'll see where it screws up at.

[Dav999]

There's this part:

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speak
say(2)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)

The first say(2) of that is not supposed to be there, so if you remove that it should work fine

EDIT: I see another mistake:

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say(4)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I hope this thing actually works.
backgroundtext
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
The say(4) is supposed to be say(5) there.

[Info Teddy]

There's this part:

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speak
say(2)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)
The first say(2) of that is not supposed to be there, so if you remove that it should work fine

EDIT: I see another mistake:

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say(4)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I hope this thing actually works.
backgroundtext
speak
text(1,0,0,4)The say(4) is supposed to be say(5) there.

Okay good. Now I've changed it to this--

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say(-1)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(gray)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,85,2)
DATE: 04/13/2038
TIME: 2:42 PM
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(3)
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I hope this thing actually works.
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene
untilbars
loadscript(stop)--and it's still screwing up.

Gog, VVVVVV, why do you have to be so angry at me for trying to do multiple text boxes? That doesn't make any sense!

[Dav999]

There's a say(3) that needs to be say(2)

[Info Teddy]

There's a say(3) that needs to be say(2)

Fixed.

And now I've apparently gotten the wrong number of lines in this:

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say(-1)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(gray)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,85,2)
DATE: 04/13/2038
TIME: 2:42 PM
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I hope this thing actually works.
speak
endtext
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(yellow,54,85,2)
Last time I tried this, it basically
crashed and made me lose all my
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(3)
endtext
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
logs. Which really sucked.
speak
endtext
text(1,0,0,4)
say(2)
squeak(yellow)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(yellow,54,85,2)
Or maybe I should wait for a stable
version of this thing...
speak
text(1,0,0,4)
say(3)
endtext
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(gray,54,55,1)
=[ LOG OF VITELLARY ]=
backgroundtext
speak_active
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)
text(yellow,54,85,1)
I don't really know.
speak
endtext
text(1,0,0,4)
say(4)
endtext
endcutscene
untilbars
loadscript(stop)

[Dav999]

say(2)
squeak(yellow)
say(5)

should be

say(2)
squeak(yellow)
text(1,0,0,4)
say(5)

(And scripting internally can be extremely prone to mistakes)