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VVVVVV Adventure - time to explore another dimention!
« on: September 06, 2014, 06:52:56 pm »
After Viridianclone turns good, the crewmates go back onto their ship... when yet another interference forces them to get into their new escape pod and go to the nearest safe place.
Unfortunately, things didn't go as planned...
Only Violet managed to get in the pod before the other crewmembers are teleported away. Fortunately, the place the crewmembers were teleported to was close enough to the place Violet went. They're in the same dimension!
And here's where gameplay starts:(oh, and this is also where the actual level starts. The story isn't in the level.)
wakes up to find in another level. After  :viridian: finds a warp token,  :viridian: goes to Violet.
:D
I know that I'm not too good at editing.
Here's the actual picture:
Wait, 5 crewmates remain??? ???
What? ???
Pictures:(All of them from first level)

Download:
Version 1.0
Also, I made a few smileys:
« Last Edit: September 06, 2014, 07:53:26 pm by shape worrior t »

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Re: VVVVVV Adventure - time to explore another dimention!
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2014, 08:38:02 pm »
FEEDBACK!!!

Are pretty good!

FEEDBACK ON THE LEVEL:

Just so you know: this feedback is HEAVILY based upon the fact that I had no idea of what was going on, nor knowing where to go.

-== Feedback ==-


Level Originality: 0/10?  The rooms were either too empty or big to tell.

Level Design: 1/10 Like I said, too empty or big. On top of that, there were WAY too many areas where you had to up and back down, with no hazards in sight. Pointless.

Roomnames: 5/10  The roomnames were okay.

Story: 1/10 Story was present, but not understandable. I found myself running into scripts I had ALREADY found, such as the script where Viridian says "Help" for no reason,  ??? MULTIPLE TIMES. Please fix!

"Fun Factor": 0/10 I had no idea what the heck was going on. Not fun at all.

-==Sorry if this rating is really hard, I just didn't understand anything.  :-[ :(==-


-==OVERALL RATING==-

7 out of 30
 
aka:  C-

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Re: VVVVVV Adventure - time to explore another dimention!
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2014, 01:13:20 am »
FEEDBACK!!!

Are pretty good!
:viridian:
FEEDBACK ON THE LEVEL:

Just so you know: this feedback is HEAVILY based upon the fact that I had no idea of what was going on, nor knowing where to go.

-== Feedback ==-


Level Originality: 0/10?  The rooms were either too empty or big to tell.

Level Design: 1/10 Like I said, too empty or big. On top of that, there were WAY too many areas where you had to up and back down, with no hazards in sight. Pointless.

Roomnames: 5/10  The roomnames were okay.

Story: 1/10 Story was present, but not understandable. I found myself running into scripts I had ALREADY found, such as the script where Viridian says "Help" for no reason,  ??? MULTIPLE TIMES. Please fix!

"Fun Factor": 0/10 I had no idea what the heck was going on. Not fun at all.

-==Sorry if this rating is really hard, I just didn't understand anything.  :-[ :(==-


-==OVERALL RATING==-

7 out of 30
 
aka:  C-

I fixed the flag problem and made more rooms have hazards.
I don't know if this is going to do anything good, but oh well...
Off topic
What would your score be for a level that's so horrible that it deserved -1text1004? 8)
« Last Edit: September 07, 2014, 01:17:19 am by shape worrior t »

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Re: VVVVVV Adventure - time to explore another dimention!
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2014, 05:14:31 pm »
-1text1004
What is that?
Just a joke about internal scripting. Any comments on the new version?